mina juveler Thank you for your comment. I've tried to put the pen on the paper, but then the text was not blurred and I wanted it to be blurred so I have to put the pen that way.
Margie I like the green and the DOF. I understood there would be wring at some point.
mina juveler Thank you :)
Jennifer Feedback for ya! Conceptually this seems kind of odd, because I would expect the pen to be poised and ready to write on the paper, rather than so far in front of it. It ends up with a more posed feel rather than a naturally captured moment. Not necessarily bad, just depends on what you were going for. Personally, I'm also curious about what's on the list ;)