bakery jewels

Some more practising. I'm quite happy with the portraits, but I can't show them here. I'd be happy about constructive criticism! #jewelry #teenage-girl #bread #studio-photography #flash

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EXIF data

Brand

SONY

Model

ILCE-6000

Aperture

ƒ/16.0

Focal length

50mm

Shutter speed

1/125s

ISO

100

jazzie

Published 6 months ago

tigg Flash photography - a skill I have not got. I find the blond strand of hair running diagonally and parallel to her fingers slightly distracting from the main subject. As you asked.
Didi you try a tight square crop to have the two items of jewellery and the ear filling the frame? Who knows.

6mos

jazzie True about the blond strand of hair. looks like one finger more when you're not closely looking.
The frame was bigger initially, showing some more of the girl's face and a golden glossy spot further up on her head.